Friday, January 29, 2010

Do toook!

Here is a ghazal where a human being in a human being's body, is talking to his god. He shows his worries and concerns towards the distance that man is raising every day, away from the god. I hope that it appeals!

Mandir masjidon mein bhi bhagwaan nahi milta

Kisi ki aankhon mein jhanko to insaan nahi milta

Ye ajeeb duniya ho gayi hai teri

Yahan teri meri zarurat ka samaan nahi milta.

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Khuli dukaan hai aadmi, band dilon ke darwaaze

Aansuon ke bhaav par, milte khushiyon ke behlave

Ghut ghut ke mar leta hai aadmi, ab yahan shamshan nahi milta

Yahan teri meri zarurat ka samaan nahin milta.

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Teri sikhayi seekhon ka, yahan sab remix banaya karte hain

Rishton ki dor se sab khoob pech ladaya karte hain

Yahan waqt itna kimti hai ki kisi ko waqt nahin milta

Yahan teri meri zarurat ka samaan nahin milta.

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Rashq karega ab tu bhi kispar, yahan log ab tera ehsaan nahin mante

Khoob sajayi duniya mohabbat se tune, par log use ‘disorder’ se kuch alag nahi mante

Tere jazbaaton pe khud rona aata tujhe, par achha hai jo ab tu yahan nahin rehta

Yahan teri meri zarurat ka samaan nahin milta.

-Palok Singh

3 comments:

  1. Nice….well said..well thought!!!!

    I wonder why everything is getting so mechanical….

    ‘Rishton ki dor se sab khoob pech ladaya karte hain
    Yahan waqt itna kimti hai ki kisi ko waqt nahin milta’…..awesome….:)

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  2. thanks neelam...it is one of my favourite poem, of all i have written till date...thus your appreciation and concerns matters a lot.
    aur isliye do line tumhare liye....
    waqt ki nazam ya nazam ki syahi thi tum,
    koi kirdar ya puri kahani thi tum,
    darasal zindagi ka khel hi kuch aisa hai,
    na manzil na rasta bas ek ankahi kasam nibhani thi tum....

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  3. Hey palok
    That was awesome....
    taking ur inspiration,,,just thought to write somthing...
    take a glance http://nishu-neelam.blogspot.com

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